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I don't know where,
I don't know where,
Where my path will lead, but I'll follow my feet and
hopefully they'll keep me on the ground and I'll be walking to the sound

Follow, follow, follow my feet.
Follow, follow, follow your feet.





And thus ends the new gospel, the history of the 179th devil Jensen Ackles, who was conscripted into service at the age of thirty-two, and escaped it over a hundred years later by falling in love and going after that love.

Why God, in his infinite wisdom, could not explain to Jensen his purposes, or why he was chosen in the first place, will sadly remain a mystery to all. But if there is a lesson here, it is surely that above all else comes love and-

Dumah is now informing me that if I end the gospel in such a sappy way I will be the laughingstock of all of Heaven. I would smartly retort that while this may be true, the point of this gospel is not to gain notoriety or respect; it is to accurately reflect what happened at the end of Jensen’s reign in Hell.

I am now being told that I am a fool. Which may be true, and I may also be a hopeless romantic of the lowest stripe, but I am welcomed into social gatherings already whereas Dumah is often left resting on his heels and cooling his wings.

Here would be a good place for an epilogue I suppose, if I cannot discuss the larger ramifications of the tale.

The fallen angel Sariel was given a new devil to mentor and care for. She likes him infinitely less than she did Jensen, but that was to be expected. He was, after all, her favorite since the beginning of the Pit. She does have more control over the new devil, as I am told he is much weaker and less assertive than Jensen was. Which means that she is given more passes to the surface, and that she can use them to visit her old friend and his new life. Sariel is very pleased with this outcome. Jensen pretends that he is not.

Gen and Danni are still together, still happy, and still a holy terror to anyone who questions them. They had a ceremony in Massachusetts that resulted in Jensen calling upon his years of experience with manipulation to avoid several arrests. The pictures are somewhat legendary, and have been used to create several memes. Gen thinks this is delightful. Danni thinks that it’s just nice that her wife is so happy about it.

As for Jared and Jensen?

They are very happy. Jensen fumbled a bit while trying to figure out what he wanted to do with his life. At first he made an incredible amount of money working for the actual Skymall, but it was quickly evident that this was not the sort of thing he should continue doing if he wished to change and grow along with Jared. As a result he tried a number of different positions before finding that it was easy to turn his skills towards bettering the world. Jensen began to work for charities, twisting and coercing rich men and women into donating to good causes. It was surprisingly easy even though it was, in essence, the opposite of what he had done for so long. The goal of accumulating wealth was replaced with accumulating glory and immortality through their donations.

Jared on the other hand continued on with things as they had been before. Very little changed. Once a month Jared still went to church. A new one, as his old church was going through a fair number of struggles since their pastor was found with a teenager. And then arrested. Jensen pointed out the silliness of Jared’s habit and that he had no reason to be particularly grateful to God one way or another. Jared thinks this is a foolish assertion, as God brought Jensen to him. Much arguing has occurred from that response. Even with all of that said, Jared had changed some. He was a little less idealistic, a little less naïve, and those weren’t bad things when paired with hope. Certainly nothing bordering on jaded or bitter.

They are settled together, comfortable and happy, and both of them have grown. For in the end-

Dumah is telling me that I have run out of time and space. Allow me to simply say this then. The world is a very big place full of very different people. They come and go, pass by you with sometimes a smile and a kind word, sometimes a scowl and silence, but a whole life of their own carried on their shoulders.

It’s easy to break them down further. Easy to take apart what it took them so long to build. And you could do that and feel accomplished and whole. You could be apathetic to their plights and simply allow them to continue to struggle under the weight of all that consciousness.

Or, like Jared, you could instill in them a little bit of hope and faith. Something that will turn their heads, change their points of view, and cause them to spread the same hope and faith into the rest of the world.

Also, for the record of this gospel, Dumah wouldn’t know a hanging participle if it bit him in the buttocks.

Part 4
Masterpost

Date: 2015-07-25 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thruterryseyes.livejournal.com
I enjoyed that. Nicely done.

Date: 2016-07-17 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
I'm so very glad you liked it! Thank your for commenting and enjoying! I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2015-07-25 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dridri93.livejournal.com
This was well done! I'll admit that when I realized what was going on, I was worried the dogs would die...after all, what better way to leave Jared with nothing than to take away his loyal companions? But thankfully, everything turned out alright, no one died, and Jensen and Jared manage to live happily ever after.
(I really loved your take on the Job mythos, too. Thank you for writing and sharing!)

Date: 2016-07-17 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading and responding! I love the Job myth and being able to explore it was a lot of fun. Also, killing doggies is just too mean. Even for the devil!

I'm so glad you liked it and thank you for responding! I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2016-07-17 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
XD Thank you so much! I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2015-07-26 05:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adameyezd.livejournal.com

Terrific story! God Himself/Herself would be impressed. The Devil would be jealous. I'm in awe of your talent.

Thank you so much for writing this!

Date: 2016-07-17 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
I'm blushing pretty hard right now. Thank you so much for responding and I'm so glad you liked it! I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2015-07-27 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marlowe78.livejournal.com
This - this has been the bang I've been waiting for!
Well-written and unique and clever, and funny and smart and all that a good story needs to be.

Big bag of kudos for this!

Date: 2016-07-17 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!! This was an awesome response, and I'm sorry it took me so long to reply to it! I'm glad that I could bring a great story to you, and that you enjoyed it!

thank you

Date: 2015-07-28 01:54 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This story was wonderful, very clever and original. Have you ever read job by robert heinlein?

Re: thank you

Date: 2016-07-17 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I have not, but it's going on my list now!!! I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2015-07-29 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mdlaw.livejournal.com
I cried through most of this. Jared's plight really got to me. m :)

Date: 2016-07-17 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm so glad it affected it, and that you enjoyed it and responded to it. I apologize it took me so long to thank you!

Date: 2016-07-17 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I'm glad to see you back on lj.

Date: 2016-07-22 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad to be back!

Date: 2015-08-02 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lamis-p.livejournal.com
Great read! Thank you.

Date: 2016-07-17 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank YOU! I'm so glad you liked it! I'm also so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2015-08-03 05:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tx-devilorangel.livejournal.com
Very interesting and enjoyable story. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Date: 2016-07-17 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Absolutely my pleasure, and thank you so much for reading and responding! I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2015-08-04 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unplugged32.livejournal.com
Brilliant, loved it!!

Date: 2016-07-17 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I'm also so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2015-08-13 08:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soncnica.livejournal.com
I liked this, it was really well written and funny and sad and with a happy ending, thank goodness, because a sad ending would probably make me cry. A lot!

Tnx for sharing!

S.

Date: 2016-07-17 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
I am so obsessed with happy endings, I cannot even tell you. Thank you so much for reading, enjoying, and commenting! I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2015-08-14 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] astafir.livejournal.com
That was such a great story! I liked it when I read the summary, because Jensen being the devil is so interesting! Then I started reading it and... I started reading it at home in the morning, I continued reading it on my way to work and then I spent half of my day reading it because I just couldn't stop I was so excited to know what happens next! And you made me really worried when it was revealed that Jared is going to go through tragedies like Job did... I had to google a little to better understand what Sariel was telling Jensen about Job.. And I was afraid that somebody is going to die in the hospital, or all his family would die... Thankfully Jensen was not that mean! I liked the part where Sariel told Jensen that he was bad at doing his job because he just maintained the status quo... I would really really want to know why God chose Jensen?.. Oh and it was clear that Jensen worked as the devil for a very long time but when it turned out to be over a hundread years? Why that 13th devil was spared after fifty years?.. God works in mysterious ways...

I liked the part where Jensen was telling Jared the whole truth, I liked the trial, I liked Sariel and I like the style in which the gospel is written! I like the bickering of Hesediel and Dumah! I also liked very much your writing style. English is not my native language so it's not really conscious feeling, but I have a feeling that the vocabulary is quite rich! Thank you so much! That was amazing!

Date: 2016-07-17 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
I'm so very glad it captured you and that you enjoyed!

I think in Jensen's case God picked him because he was just so unhappy and apathetic. It became a challenge to make him a passionate man, one who would choose a side and go for it. As for the 13th devil, he found the loophole so much faster. XD

I'm so very glad that you enjoyed this, and I always admire people who read in second and third languages because I suffer from the terrible American stereotype of being mostly monolingual.

Thank you again for commenting on this, for reading it, and for enjoying it! I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2015-08-22 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] masja-17.livejournal.com
Awesome! Very well done!

<3

Date: 2016-07-17 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I apologize for it taking so long to reply to you!!!

Date: 2015-08-31 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] one-2-3-4.livejournal.com
Wow. Just...wow. Truthfully I went into this thinking I'd maybe have a bit of a giggle but I am more than blown away with what you have done here. I am uncertain I can do it justice without sounding a fool, so I am just going to settle with saying thank you for writing and sharing this, and congratulations on finishing. What a work!

Date: 2016-07-17 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!!!!!!

I think I set this one up to be funny and then it got away from me, so I'm glad both halves of the coin came through. You have more than done it justice simply by giving it your time and then giving it even more time to respond to it. I am so appreciative that you did so, and I apologize for how incredibly long it took me to respond to you!!!

Date: 2015-09-23 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tipsy-kitty.livejournal.com
I loved this, it was funny and sad and thought-provoking, and such an interesting take on God and Job.

Date: 2016-07-17 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, and that the mythos played out well instead of dorky or awkward. I'm so sorry it took so long to reply and thank you for this!!

Date: 2015-10-19 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] z3s-keep-going.livejournal.com
this was fantastic! definitely one of my favorite big bangs of the year!

Date: 2016-07-17 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
I'm so very glad to hear that and thank you so much for reading and replying!!! I'm sorry it took me so long to thank you!

Date: 2015-11-20 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] equally-dour.livejournal.com
that was wonderful! <3

Date: 2016-07-17 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, and thank you for commenting and enjoying! I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply!!

Date: 2015-11-29 09:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jennygeee.livejournal.com
It has taken me this long to read this as I didn't think I would enjoy it - well more fool me!!

This was so good, I loved everything about it, it was so well written - I was engrossed from start to finish.

Thank you so much for this and I'm sorry it took me so long!

Date: 2016-07-17 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dimeliora.livejournal.com
I'm so glad to have surprised you!! :D

No apologies needed whatsoever, and I apologize it took me so long to respond. I'm glad that it ended up being good for you, and thank you for taking the time to read and comment!

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